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Welcome to my very first website teardownāeven though I feel like Iāve been doing them in my head for my entire marketing career.
Websites are every SaaS companyās first line of defense.
Most startups canāt afford to have a website that doesnāt enable them to:
1. Build relationships with their customers
2. Ultimately sell their product
Every visit countsāespecially if itās a qualified visit.
Because I understand how important messaging, traffic, and conversion are in the early stages, Iām here to offer my first impressions, feedback, and general thoughts on how well that first line of defense is built and prepared!
I make a few mistakes while recording (ugh⦠desktop notifications reeaalllyyy kill me) but overall, I think I got the hang of it. š
ClientSherpaāFriendly, automated client intake for attorneys
We wouldnāt be here if it werenāt for the idea from a good āol series of tweets!
Hereās how it shook out.
Would anyone be interested in or watch live website and/or business teardowns? Maybe on something like Twitch or YouTube?
(āTeardownā feels like the wrong word for this…more like āgive stream-of-consciousness UI/UX/marketing/business feedbackā)
— Josh Pigford (@Shpigford) March 29, 2018
@AsiaMatos sign me up @ClientSherpa
— Bryan Marble – bsky (@LostMahbles) March 29, 2018
Well NOW I'm excited. pic.twitter.com/T0h1vC3L2I
— Asia Orangio ⨠(@AsiaOrangio) May 11, 2018
So of course, I dig in.
HUGE thanks to ClientSherpa for being my first guinea pig.Ā š
Iām in the process of figuring out a system through which I can discuss these websites. (So if you like the way I discuss websites, let me know in the comments!)
Going in willy-nilly is probably fine for most onlookers, but I like to have a set of things to think about when dissecting and analyzing the parts.
Based on the feedback I think is most important, I arrived at 5 points + the ultimate test:
1. Above-the-fold
2. The Basics
3. Copy
4. Design
5. Content
6. The Conversion Test: Would I sign up?
What Iām not covering:
– Ultimate conversion rates (because I donāt have those details!)
– PricingāI have Patrick Campbell at Price Intelligently for that š
– Onboardingābecause Val Geisler is my onboarding guru ā¤ļø
Letās dig in, shall we?
ClientSherpa’s Above-the-Fold

My literal first thought was āOh cool. I bet the image will load any second.ā
⦠And so I waited.
.. And then it didnāt load. š
(whispers) ā¦.because there isnāt one.
I admit I was surprised.
Reading the headline and its description below, I pretty much get the gist:
- WHO: Itās for attorneys
- WHAT: Itās for client intake
- WHY: Because getting clients to do the intake thing sucks? A lot?
- HOW: I think itās through some kind of software
- WHERE: If I didnāt see the ātry ClientSherpa for freeā, I wouldnāt know where Iām supposed to go from here (except for, of course, to scroll).
That āHOWā is important. Thereās no product image above-the-fold, and that might be a conscious decision (totally legit if it helps conversion rates), but not knowing what Iām looking at might be confusing.
Is this software? I guess⦠but without scrolling, I really donāt know.
Could just be me, but a high-quality, solid product image is missing.
Another thing I noticed? No immediate call-to-action above-the-fold.
We have this almost-ghost-button in the menu. Itās not totally transparent, but itās light enough to get lost.

There it is. Just chillin’.
As they say, if you want someone to click it, better make it stand out.
(We actually see this later in the page which makes me pretty happy.)
The Basics
Letās do a quick check for the basics.
I consider āthe basicsā to be just thatāthe things that I, both as a complete stranger to the brand and a SaaS marketer, expect to see in a website & landing page.
Hereās the checklist I always use:
- Is there a value proposition? Yes – although I think it could be pushed further and made even more compelling.
- Is there a main call-to-action? Yes – sign up for the free trial!
- Is there a way to get in touch with the creators of this product / website? Yes – thereās a ācontact usā link in the footer of the page.
- Is there some kind of social proof? Yes – all the way at the bottom of the page, there are two customer testimonials.
- Is there an overview of either the process or the product itself? Yes – thereās both product images and feature highlights and a page that covers the story of how the tool works in real life.
- Is there a way to learn more about the creators? Kind of – thereās an āAbout Usā page, but itās not really about the makers! Seems pretty dodgy to meā¦
So okay! Five out of six; not too shabby. Hereās a few noteworthy deep-divesā¦
The Social Proof
I loved these customer testimonials.

Customer testimonials are like the āhey look at me! Iām valuable and credible!ā for a SaaS company, and especially for a startup.
As a startup, youāre kinda new to the game, and anything you can do to put people at ease and gain trust is a must-have.
Testimonials also need to resonate with your target audience, and be as relevant to the product as possible.
Here, the testimonial on the right is š„.
āIf I get them in the office, I can close 70% of my clients.ā
WOO BOY. Iām shook.
Now thatās a powerful value proposition and testimonial.
Think about it ā if she doesnāt get those people in the door due to some lack of intake or just terrible processing, SHE DOESNāT MAKE MONEY.
Even as a not-actual-lawyer, I felt that in my gut.
That makes me think the value proposition could be pushed further into more of a concrete, realized outcome and ClientSherpa focus more on the actual revenue results these lawyers see when they improve their intake.
Thatās powerful.
But you know what the biggest problem is?
That powerful asf testimonial is aaaaaaallllll the way at the bottom of the page.
And itās tiny.
Weāre making two strong assumptions:
1. People are going to scroll that far (better install Hotjar to find out)
2. Theyāre going to read that testimonial
I highly recommend making those testimonials bigger and pulling them up on the page.
The CTA
Remember when I said thereās a CTA?
Itās here at the bottom of the page.

Itās cool that itās at the bottomāmost CTAs are.
But I wanted to note that this is a much more visually compelling CTA than the one in the navigation bar.
That green pops. And it makes me think of all the money Iām going to have because my intake process is going to be š„.
Copy
When I work with new clients, Iām always scrutinizing their copy.
Iām looking to see how well theyāre able to:
– capture the problem and the pain,
– make me relive that pain all over again, and
– communicate why their solution is the best solution to my pain.
Overall, ClientSherpa definitely understands their target audience (attorneys) and uses the language they might expect (intake, agreements, etc).
What I was missing was feeling the tip of a knife pointed at my gut.
It sounds gruesome, but that’s exactly how people feel when they buy. It’s emotional.
Great copy is kinda funny in that way. You might not even be an attorney, but great copy will make you feel like you have all of those problems and the only solution is ClientSherpa.
The testimonial at the bottom of the page actually did that for me.
As mentioned previously, losing that money because prospects arenāt filling out those forms hurts my soul and makes me want to throw up.
I would bet actual lawyers feel the same way.
Thatās what I mean by pushing the copy; making it more gut-punchy.
Design
Weād be remiss if we didnāt talk about the design of the site.
Itās earthy.
Itās not-so-saturated (and very toned down).
The typefaces give me this elegant vibe.
Itās peaceful.
But that actually worries me a little bit.
Is it too peaceful? Is it too calming? Would I want to take the next step?

Iām not sure, but I will say I love the consistency between what Iām assuming is the product and the website and the overall look and feel.
If thereās opportunity to add contrast (like the green button on the maroon background), then design-wise, Iād try to identify those.
Visually, thereās not a ton that activates me, and as a marketer, that makes me worry.
Still, itās beautiful.
My only other real design critiques are to give those images some breathing room and to make the text larger!
This poor product image is fighting to either be grounded, or floatingābut it canāt be both, so it instead hangs off its own edge.

And then you have barely-there copy that is so important, but so smol.
The smol-est.

Yeah.. lemme justā¦

Content
Okay. This is where it gets a little interesting.
When analyzing a websiteās content, Iām looking at the actual pages theyāve presented to me, feature pages, pricing, integrations, blog contentāthe full shebang.
Thereās a few things I notice:
- What? No blog?
- Thereās really no other content periodā¦
- The About Us page is not an About Page
Totally cool that ClientSherpa hasn’t implemented a content strategy yet. (Most startups won’t right off the bat.)
I also have a feeling the super lean website is probably intentional, but Iād question if that makes sense for the target audience.
Do attorneys need more information before signing up for something like this?
I personally donāt know and Iād want to find out.
I always find it weird when a company doesnāt have a blog (or even like.. product updates or something), but thereās also just no way to stay in touch with ClientSherpa if Iām not ready to buy.
No social profiles.
No nada.
But perhaps the biggest thing I noticed was that the About Us page isnāt actually an About Us page!
Itās really more of a “How It Works” page.

I feel robbed! Bamboozled! Tricked!
(Iām just kiddingāIām not that mad..)
I legitimately wanted to read about the founders and their knight-in-shining-armor story about how theyāre changing the way lawyers make more money!
I appreciate the āHow It Worksā page (because itās actually really well done), but under the guise of an āAbout Usā could be both really strategic and also totally dismissive at the same time.
I do wonder if this helps conversion rates at all. If it does, somehow, then ignore me.
But if people bounce immediately on this page, I can take a guess as to why.
So does it pass The Conversion Testā¢ļø?
Overallāyes.
I think it passes.
If I were an eager attorney and I really felt the pain, Iād probably do the hard work of reading everything and piecing it all together.
But if I were a really skeptical or busy attorney, Iād probably bounce because it didnāt do enough to grab my attention.
I hate saying this but I feel like I’m going to say this a lot: It Dependsā¢ļø.
It depends on goals, existing conversion rates, and various other factors we donāt have access to!
Even still, a splendid start!
Bravo, ClientSherpa! š
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